Written by Hal Croasmun
How dramatic are your lead characters?
Four years ago, I gave a lady feedback on her first 3 pages with the agreement that I could use it as an example. It was a great decision because it uncovered an extremely important principle...
...Your lead characters need to be DESIGNED to create drama!
Before she sent me the script, the writer launched into how much she loved her main character and how I couldn't possibly get the true value of the character out of three pages. She wanted me to experience ALL of the drama that happened to her lead character, which is a reasonable request, but something about it bothered me.
I asked her to email me her lead character's profile, also. Here is what she emailed me:
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DESCRIPTION: JERRY is a strong farmer turned coach who would never harm a flea.
TRAITS: Kind, generous, caring, strong.
SUBTEXT: Jerry has always wanted to travel, but never complains about it.
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